East Meets West, 10" x 8", 140 ' Daler-Rowney Langton Prestige NOT paper |
Yeah.
I've had many interests - music, art and writing among them. But an aspect common to all that I have admired is improv.
Bluegrass and jazz, even classical, for example. They have this in common. They start with a theme, then the touch of the individual musicians are brought to bear. The theme is squeezed and stretched and twisted and turned.
I painted this watercolor in just that way. I perched in front of a building that, by the way, looks nothing like this, and outlined a few of its parts. Then I began to improvise. I drew lines that just felt right [yeah] in that they were visually pleasing to me geometrically. And then I started to paint. Aside from the awnings that really were pink (I think), everything else was improv.
So this painting is semi-abstract.
Take it away Allen, your stroll is different than mine, but oh so beautifully described..
I had to stop by when I saw this in my reader. Your painting is how I would imagine Miami warm vibrant and full of lushness and movement. It's fantastic.
ReplyDeleteThank you! That is quite a compliment. What's funny is I was thinking more Miami meets New Mexico, or something..
DeleteAll straight lines and hard angles, yet there is nothing hard or sharp about this.
ReplyDeleteYou made it feel soft and comforting with the colours.
Like the sun is melting all the hard lines together and the texture of the walls is softer and inviting.
Really neat, I love art pieces that make me stop and really look.
Thank you for the nice words - I am getting all puffed up. Love your description of the piece. :)
DeleteI LOVE it Dan... I can hear you... taking it away (as they say in Jazz jams).
ReplyDeleteA capital L-O-V-E?! Why thanks! I hope to do more like this.
Deletevery intriguing!...and infused with Florida sunlight. I like it!
ReplyDeleteI take the Florida sunlight wherever I go. Just call me sunny. Thanks!
DeleteLovely Dan, great colours again!
ReplyDeleteThanks Debra, glad you like it!
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ReplyDeleteGreat painting, Dan. You may have improvised the shapes, but you still managed to capture the light beautifully. Thanks for sharing the Ginsberg poem. The read by SpokenVerse brought it to life wonderfully. (PS, sorry to post and delete, but I abhor when I improvise spelling.)
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Yeah, at first I was going to look for something read by him or another beat poet, but when I came across this - it is so well done, and I like the way he added the photos and words to follow. Thanks about your comment about the light! "Great painting" is quite a compliment, given your experience, and I appreciate it.
DeleteI like the colours, the transparency , the overall loose aspect of it and the way you let our eye wander around !!
ReplyDeleteThank you Martine! If only I could be that loose all of the time! :)
DeleteOn beam... on track ... you're really there on this one! Love the musical metaphor ... love the reality of the dream as it takes on lines and angles, but somehow keeps the dream quality!
ReplyDeleteWhy does Ginsberg always sound like he comes from the North Midlands of England? Until he says, 'tomato' ....
"You say tomato and we say tom-art-toe,
You say potato and we say.... [it the same as you do!]"
Thanks John! I'm glad you found a dream quality. This isn't read by Ginsberg - see the note I added above - he is probably from the North Midlands of England. In print we all say potato and tomato the same way!
DeleteImprov is where it's at for you. There's nothing wrong with your sense of line,space and color. Brilliant painting Dan, one of your best. And Ginsberg? Does sound like he comes from Simlett's part of the world, till he says potato. Then we know he's our own to be held in awe. He could read me poetry all day long.
ReplyDeleteBrilliant?! Thank you! That is not Ginsberg reading. I've added a note to the post - in fact he does read other poems on You Tube and I've included the link.
DeleteLooks very like sunny rooftops and terraces, nice abstract feel.
ReplyDeleteThank you!
DeleteLovely to look at, wonderful colors, bright and warm. What's not to like about being in FL?
ReplyDeleteI love Florida, what can I say? Thanks!
DeleteI really like the collage effect. You see straight lines and can paint them. (As someone who never met a straight line without the aid of a ruler- it's impressive.)
ReplyDeleteAnd who said I didn't use a straight edge? I did. Not a ruler - the side of a plastic watercolor palette. (Confessions, good for my soul). I like the way you have compared it to a collage - neat analogy. Thanks.
DeleteThought provoking, as usual:)
ReplyDeleteAh the thoughts I can think! ;)
DeleteHey man, this looks like a drive-in theater to me, and that's where it WAS (I was a teen in the late 50s). Love the painting.
ReplyDeleteI have the book, Allen Ginsberg Photographs. Inside the book, he wrote "for Hallie Farber on her 49th birthday," and he drew a large flower with a skull below, then his signature. The book was a gift. Now I wonder about that skull.
I was intrigued, so I googled an explanation for the autograph and found this in an online Orlando Sentinel article about Ginsberg:
Delete"Juggassar, a 21-year-old junior at Brooklyn College, handed Ginsberg a thick paperback edition after classes the other day and then stood clear as the maestro's fountain pen swooped toward an empty page.From a swirl of lines, a Buddha-like image suddenly appeared. In a corner, Ginsberg circled the word ''eclipse,'' to note the celestial event that had occurred earlier in the week, and elsewhere drew a skull with flowers blooming from the mouth - a tribute, he said, to the triumph of life over death."
I kinda intended for the white square to be a part of the building. I see the drive-in theater, but don't really like to look at it that way. But glad you love the painting.
Lovely painting so bright, so colourful, so Florida! Love it!
ReplyDeleteThank you!! The funny thing is I was not only thinking Florida but also New Mexico (or something), which is why I called it East Meets West. Glad you like it!
DeleteI like how everything is so nice and straight and structured and yet....very artistic! :)
ReplyDeleteThank you! It's great to break out of those lines!
DeleteAs I recall both Wassily Kandinsky and Paul Klee were highly influenced by music in their approach to painting. The geometric progressions and improvisations were right up their proverbial alley (did they envision a Miami alley?)
ReplyDeleteSo, you're in great company. I enjoyed the light, airy feel, almost as if it could float away. But, the geometry brings it back to, hmmm, not quite earth, but Dan's place, or canvas :)
I read Kandinsky's book in which he definitely compared art to music. I love the way in the digital art everything - word, music, and art, are just 0's and 1's. To me it is just further proof that everything and everyone is part of one great something, Eh?
DeleteI did feel I was in Dan's place with this one. Thanks!
Your improv painting is fantastic Dan. You might like the work of a British watercolour it's named Shirley Trevena.
ReplyDeleteHappy Painting.
I was thinking there has to be a way to do this with the figure too - I was thinking of Diebenkorn and a new artist I discovered named Sangram Majumdar. Neither work in watercolor. So I will be looking more at Shirley Trevena, thanks!
DeleteAnd I'm glad you think this is fantastic, too. Thank you!